"When i die, I want to sleep, and slowly awake to a drifty abyss, to only be surrounded by the mesmerizing oasis my mind so heavenly engulfs. Reuniting my soul with my heart is a task only measurable by ones own acts of love, kindness, and inspiration, and with only a dim shimmering light in the distance guiding you through this challenge, this is a task for a god, but only 1 exist so what shall I do? Oh well, I guess I'll live."
6 comments:
it lacks organization and a point.
alright.
phenomenal!!!! ♥
Thank you all for the constructive criticism really need it to become a good poet!
-Mogos Tedla
keep triying
its...humorous,
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